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My body aches all over and comfort I cannot catch.
The days pass on as sleep still eludes my life.
Will this forever day time ever end for me?
Or will my eyes just close and never open again?
Will the beating of my heart ever slow down?
At least enough for me to finally breathe,
I doubt it, as I watch the numbers on the clock rotate
That circle that spins around in my mind,
I seem to be walking in the darkness constantly,
Reaching out for things that were never there,
How did I fall into this darkness, into this abyss?
Can I save myself? I must, no one else can,
Once again I reach for my own hand,
Will I deliver myself from my disparity?
Or will I slip in the grasp of my own love?

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This is something that just came to me.. It needs work but I just had to get it out before it was gone.. you know how that goes :)

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©18 October 2011 - 4:41am — raminastar
20 November 2011 - 6:52am — MatthewWayne
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Wow loved the descriptive

Wow loved the descriptive writing here!! :) I know all to well where your coming from on this one

"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

20 November 2011 - 7:14am — raminastar
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Thank you so much, I am glad

Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it. I was up.. obviously lol and the longer I am up I start to ramble.. this is the product of my rambling. :)