I'll Hold You

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I held you when we were friends

And things were not okay,

I'd hold you anytime my love,

Just to make you stay,

I hold you in our quiet time,

When there's only me and you

And I'll hold you when there's others there,

To prove my love is true,

I'll hold you love, in my arms,

Each and every night,

I'll hold you even later though,

When i've fallen from your sight,

I'll hold you when the sun goes down,

And the silhouettes are gone,

And I'll hold you when we're to old,

To hear our favorite song,

I'll hold your hand when i die,

And when all breath is gone,

I'll hold you tight to say good-bye,

So you wont feel alone

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Kristen marie Katona's picture

that was sweet open and heartfelt lovely write

Afzal Shauq's picture

good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?