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Breathe You In
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Older As the dawn rose up today,
All my fears simmered away,
Just to feel you here beside me,
Was the one reality that set me free,
I turn to you and look in your eyes,
Then all at once time just stands by,
You touch my face, sweet bliss begins,
But all I can do is breathe you in,
Knowing that I leave today,
It takes my consciousness away,
If only I could stay with you,
We'd share a love so strong and true,
And that one last moment on my way,
I look at you and plead to stay,
Until then tears will burn like sin,
And in the silence I breathe you in.
Love the last line...
it happens often with love.
Keep writing - Keep the faith.
Ramina,
(that is such a pretty name)i love this poem,i have also loved all the others i have read of yours,dont you just adore my friend brittany bunkers poetry?!(you signed her guestbook)you seem like a beautiful person,your face is beautiful too!hehecome visit my hall,i would like that.
~joy to you~*Guinevere*~
Ramina:
What a beautiful masterpiece you havw written here.The visualization you have mastered once again in this poetic gem is so so so intense. The love that you spread with your poetic expressions is so so so awesome and breathtaking. I can actually feel the touchings of sincere love and uncompromising desires that just overflows like a beautiful waterfall into a deep mountain crystal blue lake. What a beautiful and expressive poem you have written here Ramina. Thank you for sharing your gift with me.Have a very beautiful week and please take care.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
8/25/2003