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You Can't Handle The Truth!
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Pain Your words are
constant contradictions
consistent conflictions
opposing one another
like June’s Gemini
creating virtual alibis
for inevitable lies
Forked tongue split in-two
like a Baptist-Jew
oblivious to any truth
surreal peripheral
makes it hard to deal
with unbalanced decisions
caused by bias tunnel vision
You have set precedent
& made it quite evident
you lack what it takes
to make
this last
I know you can’t
believe or conceive
that I can actually see
that you honestly
love me
when my heart concedes
to bleed
& nurture this life
you once held in your hand
because you can’t understand
You failed me!
I wish i could put my words just right the way you do damn keep yo head up
Damn, if this doesn't scream "his name" (my man) I don't know what does! This was incredible (not that I'd expect anything less from you.) and it was full of emotion. Miss your words, keep writing!
You are certainly one of the "Most Wanted" on this Post!!! I am totally feeling this one... And I too, am happy that you are back creating great works. Missed you cuz! All I ask is that you have mercy on the Gemini lol!!!
Wow! What true emotions! I'm so glad that you've started to write again, as you can tell from this poem, you needed to get it all out. I"m amazed by the amount of fans you have. You just posted all your new poems today and they're all already critiqued! I can't ever get enough of your poems, and the emotion you share with them!
Kate :)
WHOA!!!!!!! LOTS OF EMOTION BEHIND THAT ONE. WHAT TRIGGERED THIS??? VERY VERY NICE FLOW...So glad to see you back writing. Keep 'em coming..I'll be checking for you