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Mr. Police Man

please stop hitting me so hard

I do want to live

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 1:26am
©18 November 2002 - 9:17pm — raila
22 November 2002 - 4:58am — Netta Jack (not verified)
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First off, recognition to the Haiku guru. Secondly, it amazed me when you write like this. The message comes across though. This is an awesome piece. Thanks for sharing.

20 November 2002 - 8:51pm — Shanita Johnson (not verified)
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very powerful.....