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A Dark World
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Pain Brother slain
for material gain
sex attracted my sister
AIDS dismissed her
moms drank before bed
died with the bottle
between her legs
Pops loved to inject heroin
inhaling crack is what
destroyed him
my loved ones are gone
I'm all alone
which path shall I follow
in a life so shallow
WOW! SNAPSHOT! Like a picture that says a thousand words
this peice is short, to the point, and says SO MUCH. I like this peice alot! Well done.
What a powerful reality piece that tells the story of so many people today....excellent read.
wow, how does it feel to be editor's pick?? good work!! and about the "hot and cold" poem, yeah it is open to interpretation and it is representative of our different styles of love and the ups and downs too. the spin poem with the statue falling was an actual feeling and i really did collapse. it was interesting. anyway, again, nice job!
i like this one alot, although you never come out and say that you will learn from their mistakes, the implications are there if you read between the lines. well written.
this was tight as shit
Damn baby...this is deep as hell. I likes!!!