3. Dancing

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Sojourner Series

They watch me place the mat on

 

the cobblestone square

 

That guitarist I found in the park is

 

tuning his strings

 

 

 

Then

 

 

 

I take my place and he begins to play

 

I am still in myself as I begin to sway

 

I am still in myself until

 

Madness

 

breathless

 

I fall

 

I unfurl

 

There is nothing

 

but the flying

 

I soar

 

I twirl

 

Leaping

 

Freeing

 

Steady on!

 

Thatta girl!

 

What is fear?

 

Fear is thoughtless!

 

Fear is nothing!

 

Fear is fleeting!

 

No pain in my ankles

 

Or crack in my knees

 

I am something

 

Outside it

 

My spirit untamed!

 

I am aether in this moment

 

Unbodied, insane!

 

Wounds are not real

 

if you can't feel their pain

 

I am desired

 

By them,

 

Desired yet again!

 

Each time so familiar!

 

Each time outside ken!

 

Oh the hot blush

 

that comes when they cheer

 

I gasp out my thanks

 

and forget you're not here

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patriciajj's picture

Now the Sojourner performs

Now the Sojourner performs and there is an inner whirlwind in pace with the breathless movements that suggest freedom and unleashed joy. The short, staccato lines, beginning as a whispering flutter, soon pulse with empowerment: a triumph over fear, physical pain and heartbreak.

 

"Unbodied, insane!" you fly to the summit of who you truly are.

 

What a trip! Love this amazing series. 

 
S74RW4RD's picture

This latest entry in the

This latest entry in the Sojourner series accelerates right before our eyes, as the lines shorten and speaker's description of the process takes us to the conclusion; and the process has been so satisfying to the Sojourner, that the Sojourner has forgotten that someone significant (a Beloved?---I would like to think so) is actually absent.


Decades ago, the French Poet, Paul Valery, wrote a couple of Socratic Dialogues that, when published in this country, carried a Preface by Wallace Stevens.  One of the dialogues is about a dancing girl, Athikte, and how her accelerating dance takes possession both of her body and of the philosophers, including Socrates, who then construct their dialogue around her performance.  This poem reminded me of that Dialogue very much.   Admittedly, I cannot read the original French text and have to rely only upon Stevens' excerpts from, and description of, it; but I what I do know of the Dialogue was brought to mind by your magnificent poem; and it is always a great thing when one poem converses with another in the reader's mind.  Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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rachel's picture

You have inspired me to go on

You have inspired me to go on a hunt for this dialogue, so I may incorporate it consciously!

S74RW4RD's picture

Anazon has, or used to have,

Anazon has, or used to have, it; but I have never found it on the internet.


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