Finale II

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Tennessee Myth

Alone I hunt

In the last winter of my life

Barren and cold the wasteland

Black bark trees, dead with winter,

Snow crunching under my grey paws

 

I am the wolf

I am the law

 

And by the law of strength I've lived

And by the law of strength I'm condemned

 

I meet my end

At the lake

When the ice cracks

Under my weight

 

I yelp as the frigid waters bite through my fur

As I bit through so many necks

A buck, a fox, a fish, a man

Pleased, I am, even in death

Not prey-slain

Or defeated by a young whelp

The elements herself

Closed her teeth around my neck

 

I fight, as I am meant to,

But age has set in

And I sink into the river

To the darkness at the end

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From deceptively simple

From deceptively simple language, the poem creates a devestatingly poignant and philosophically compliex perspective.  Your poem reminds me of something J.V.Cunningham, one of America's greatest Poets, said:  that the best Poetry looks like it was easy to write, and is, in truth, too difficult for most people to write.  This poem, like your other poems, meets and exceeds the Cunningham test.


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