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Blind Faith
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Volume One ~~)(~~
“Blind Faith”
If I’m going to Hell
Therese a secret I’m going to tell
It’s not a pretty white lie
It will make your faith run dry
“I wanna die like Jesus Christ
nailed to that which is the ultimate heist
crowned by that which is the T.V age
sung upon your bloody stage”
We can start with a clean slate
Once I pass around this collection plate
Now throw me your money as gold
through which your soul was sold
“I wanna die like Jesus Christ
nailed to that which is the ultimate heist
crowned by the computer age
sung on your corrupted stage”
I could be your God, if he wasn’t so flawed
I could be your prophet, I see “The Stock Market”
I could be your brother, crawl into bed with me lover
I can be your priest, A little boy’s feast.
I can be your saint, your angel, and your minister
or how about something a little more sinister
I can be the Antichrist
it’s a big job but a small price.
How about the devil
all I’d have to do is sink to your level
Its all so real,
The X you sign
to complete the deal
I want to believe
but I can’t go back
It’s a war I already lost
nailed to your fucking cross
“I wanna die like Jesus Christ
Dead in Life, and still your fucking Sacrifice”
this was great! i have yet to find any poems on here that question "God" in a way that makes you think. ive read a few of your other writings and theyre all very well written - they flow smoothly, good word choice, nice rhymes etc. im gonna go read some more, this one just jumped out at me, ive got my issues with god as well so yeah. awesome job.
Rock out to your stereO
~ryss
wow. this is awesome. i've read it a few times cuz, man, it really is amazing. you are a very talented writer. i'm partial to poems about god and religion cuz i have so many issues with that kinda stuff. but anyway, i'm gonna read through more of your poems cuz i'm impressed so far. please keep on writing, and take care.