I'm all Alone

It was a sad, sad day

The rubble, it'll rot and decay

The people, lonely and sad

Sometimes it even makes me mad

I think about it every year

Even with a crystal tear

I have no one to meet

On this dusty street

I know I'm not that clever

But it's gone forever!

Look at me, look again

I'm all alone

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Dedicated to the people who died on September 11th, 2001. May you rest in peace.

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Cliff Siler's picture

I took the liberty of reading another. I do like your style but I think you're robbing the rest of us from enjoying the rest of your gift. I just feel your holding back. Well I like what you do now and we'll all be waiting for more.
Have you tried writing about how wonderful life is? even if it's not for you, maybe try to feel and write about the other end of the circle. It's difficult but so much more rewarding. You have the gift,
Cliff