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your words are smooth!
do you jest?
is life a pun?
are you a player
full of fun?
words flow so easy
from your pen
sincerity in feelings
that'll ne'er end
unbiased honesty,
rough at times
correcting proper
the disheveled
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HEY sister Linda, this is really good,in fact A+
L&P
Right! Writing is quite "rough at times," especially because it requires of us to look inside/outside ourselves honestly, and confront whatever it is that we find in order to put it into language. The business of poetry has to do with experience materialized into words, but in order to do this well--to call it "poetry"--one must live and re-live one's experiences, analyze its nuances from different angles, being aware of textures, cadences, associations, & so on. This is, of course, my own humble opinion, and my reading of your last stanza. Thanks for the read--"very well--express'd," as Alexander Pope would say!