United Seperately

United in marriage.

Joined with pure heart.

Residing separate lives

a world apart.



Merged as one

in spirit and soul.

Their thoughts transcend

the ocean wide

like telepathic waves of old.



Each travels their path,

both day and night,

ending together

at the Crossroad of Life.



Envied by some.

Admired by many.

Their love so strong.

Their trust uncanny.



Retiring together in

one abode.

Sharing all things that

life has to hold.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

friends of mine that made a long distant marriage work. AA/KA

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Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

HEART FELT AND BEAUTIFUL
L&P

Valhjim's picture

Beautiful, idealistic poem--just like your friends' "long-distance marriage." This goes to show how right Shakespeare was when he wrote, "Let me not to the marriage of true minds/ Admit impediments. . . ." Did your friends meet through the Web? Anyway, it seems that however they met, their spiritual selves did connect and the whole situattion did work happily for them both. Congratulations. Your poem tells the story in a very economic, evocative way. Thanks for the read. Keep up the good work!