A Larks Day

A day spent in a world

           of loneliness.

Tears of a Lark drop and mingle

with the flowing stream below.

While clouds above await --

their turn.



Life in the stream scurry for shelter.

Blinded by the turbulence--

not all succeed.



Suddenly, clouds fade, make way for

warmth and shine of the sun.



Rays twinkle and dance upon

the stream inviting life out from

their hiding places.



The Lark,now joined by her mate,

together...



A new life is born.

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Ian Thorpe's picture

The Gaia theory in a poem

Sharron Tyrrell's picture

I thought I had already commented on this beautiful poem but it isn't here. I love the smooth way it reads. Wonderful!!!

Amberlee Carter's picture

oh, this brought to mind a lovely summer rain when life seems to thrive with blissful glee...
I also loved the use of the word "Lark" that one tickles my poetic soul.....

Always,
Amberlee

Richard Elliott's picture

You write with clear image and pleasant flow, thank-you for allowing me to find you here. Nice Work! Richard.E.

Lance Doiel's picture

Beautiful. Your imagery created with the stroke of your quill remided me of the melodious tunes from Enya.

EVE SMITH's picture

Linda, This is beautiful. It makes me realize that all things can feel a lonliness but at the end...there is peace and the lonliness will disappear. God bless you my friend. Love, Angel Eve

Melvin Lee's picture

Hi Linda... WOWOW how lush your site has flourished~!! I must be really behind all your new poems .... *Gulp~* This work is especially interesting - the way u phrase each line...and the story's development. Unifies into a wholesome piece of poem with great imagery and expression. Smilesz. I am inspired!! ;)

Helen Schmidt's picture

A lovely poem Linda! So gentle and descriptive - I truly enjoyed reading it. Well done! Helen

Edwin Robinette's picture

I love the way this is described! Great write! Things of nature are amazing!