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Smile a While

A nothingness

A loneliness 

A bottomless

An emptiness…      

Thus the feeling

Glaring at the ceiling

 

A wait

At a steady rate…

 

Getting the tingle

Emotion and feeling collides

The feeling subsides.

Emotion resides.

An understanding of life and what it provides

 

Good Ol’ Mr Marley said it bold:    

"Your life is worth much more than gold"

               

Sorrow maketh life vile

Don’t carry it another while

Strive for the tingle and smile

Life is longer than its current mile

 

 

 

Damian Prinsloo – 24 August 2014

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©25 August 2014 - 2:10pm — prinslooman
26 August 2014 - 2:59am — Beavis
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;-)

Nice write! And welcome to PP!

26 August 2014 - 5:20am — prinslooman
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Thanx Beavis

Thanx Beavis

25 August 2014 - 6:28pm — truthintragedies
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!!!!

I adore this!! *emotion resides/an understanding of life and what it provides* beautiful and true. 

**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**

25 August 2014 - 7:39pm — prinslooman
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Thank you!  

Thank you!

 

27 August 2014 - 5:28pm — allets
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Kool Poet Here

A smile is worth a thousand frowns - I enjoyed this poem and smiled afterward. Welcome abaord the Good Ship Postpoems - Just Bein' Stella

 

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27 August 2014 - 9:40pm — prinslooman
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Thanks, Im glad my poem left

Thanks, Im glad my poem left a smile on your face :)