I can not imagine living the rest of my life without you by my side-
On the day I became your bride I knew that love had found us two-
God blessed you with me and me with you-
Our soul's God did unite forevermore-
Thank God, we are so happy as we can be-
We are in love so completely, hopelessly, and desperately.
I can not imagine living the rest of my life without you by my side-
I love you so madly and deeply this you know well you can tell-
If you were to die and go to hell, I would follow you there-
With God's strength with me-
Wait outside the gates, for the chance when you'd come near-
to the gates, I would grab you, and pluck you from hell grip-
To God's ears from my lips- This is how, and what I would do-
Undoubtablly, that is how strong my love is for you-
Because, I can not imagine living the rest of my life without you by my side. Since I became your bride!
I love you my darling dear this should make it very clear...
All I can think of to say is WOW, if I say more, I will do your poem a grave injustice. Truly beautiful from start to finish. See you back in the BlackExpressions2005 group.
Peace & Blessings,
Nate
"I can not imagine living the rest of my life without you by my side"
"If you were to die and go to hell, I would follow you there-
With God's strength with me-
Wait outside the gates, for the chance when you'd come near-
to the gates, I would grab you, and pluck you from hell grip"
A truly spectacular write.
I also have a profile on here but people rarely critique so I limited my poems to 4.
Pauletta,
I absolutely love this one! It's a tear jerker but, those of joyfull tears. Love is a beautiful thing when the real thing is recieved.
And gotta give it to ya, going to hell and waitin on the other side of the gates is a risky thing but it's a beautiful thing. It shows no matter rain or shine you will never leave.
much love for ya,
Stephanie Karpierz.
this is the way I feel about John too