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True Love
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love I believe that the Lord above
Created you for me to love
I chose you out from all the rest
Because everyone I knew I loved you best
I once had a heart and it was true
But now its gone from me to you
Take care of it as I have done
For you to have and I have none
If I died and went up there
I'd wait for you upon the golden stairs
If you're not there by Judgement Day
I'll know you went the other way
I'll give the angels back their wings
Golden hearts and other things
To prove to you my love is true
I'll go to hell just to be with you
nice work
on this piece
Hey, Sorry i haven't critiqued you lately but i've been caught up doing my own thing. Since i'm a poem lover, i've read lots of poems on pretty much every subject. This poem blew me away, i almost feel like cring it touches me that much. How you created that energy and then transmitted it to the reader is unexplainable. If i had to pick the top 10-20 poems i swear this one would be in there. I love this poem and i think it's probably the best you've ever written I think i'm going to print it out and hang it up somewhere where i'll alwys see it. Though there is one question towards this poem that ponders my mind, did you just write this no editing then posted it or did you write it edit and then posted it. it seems like a rough poem that came straight from the heart and but it's so empowering that it seems a million editors must have edited it. there are no critiques for this poem it's beautiful just the way it is. keep it up. *if this poem is for someone you love it's got to be that true love stuff*
Hi, Just wanted to say, these are very powerfull words. It's a great thing to love someone and doing anything just to be with that person. I love the way you wrote this Idea. Keep up the good work. Regards Yvonne Coffey