* Dragon Of The Seven Chambers *

               my enemy walked into fear

               as he entered the dragon  

                layer of  seven chambers



     caught and percluded from disracing his country



           you could feel the dragons firey

            breathe roasting a few miles away

          

               125 degrees the flesh would

             literealy melt of  your  skin



     he desired to die with burning fire on his mind    .

            

Author's Notes/Comments: 

THIS IS ABOUT AN EMEMY
THAT DISRACED HIS  COUNTRY TO DIE THE
TORTURE FROM A FIREY
BREATHING DRAGON

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Very intense and to the point.A very serious tone in this poem, not cajoling but terrifying! Dragons I always see as mythical and beautiful the protectors of dreams but I guess they can also be very terrifying!
I like this alot!!!
C'ya soon!
Gabby :-)