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                    flash backs of u

                  forever haunt my life



                   your sword leaves

                    a permament scar  

              that will never be expired



    and from it blood and a diease devours  my soul



  leaving me invisible to the eyes of the world ,as my

                

spirit leaves my horrified body to a revengefull afterlife .





  * This Poem was orginally written by me , April 10. 2005 *

                

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem was orignally
called All Most Expired
because of the way i
was going thru a heart
  ache and painfull situation that lefted me
feelings really sad and
depressed nobody deserves
to get treated like dirt

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©15 March 2005 - 9:07pm — poetvg
16 March 2005 - 6:47pm — Imperial Blake (not verified)
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I really like the visuals I get from this poem. Its a universal subject that can appeal to anyone who has been hurt by someone else. I really enjoyed it.
I.B.

20 January 2006 - 5:25am — Payal Bhatia (not verified)
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Lovely! Anyone with a broken heart could feel the depth u specified...And by teh way I must congratulate u on the HUUUUUUGE amount of poems tht u have put up on this website
Gr8 work...Keep it up!