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* It Cuts Like A Knife *

                   pain and misery

                    rule my life

                   tears run down

                    my face like

                    harsh words

                  that cut at my

                   soul until i

                   am no more  .

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this poem is about a
woman going thru a
rough situation all
by herself bascailly
certain words that cut
her soul and it made her
so sick she killed her
self from a drug overdose
because of the words he
said she  lefted this earth before it was her
time sucide was the answe

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©2 April 2004 - 4:12am — poetvg
12 July 2005 - 3:19am — Chris Paterson (not verified)
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hiii. you gave me critiques, so i felt it was only polite to return the favour :) anyway, regarding the actual poem. I was kinda shocked reading your comments on it, because reading it feels so real, like it's you going through it. I love the

4 April 2004 - 11:54pm — Daniel P. (not verified)
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that was great...