my life merely flowed on
like a river bearing on out
toward the sea struggling
against its current or trying
to hurry its pace both equally
useless i stood thinking for
a moment fell on my knees burying
my head into my arms. there i cried
out my last tears like a child aware
of my pain that no longer exists .
* Written By Dorreen L WojciK *
this poem is not mine at all .
wonderful... the poem is done in very rhythmic way and can be visualized too... comments on my poems from your side is expected friend.. hope your comments on my other poems will be there in litle detailed form to add your comments in my new book... your poetry is really impressive and meaningful.... I am known as peace wiher poet and here is my famous say ....((( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )))hope you keep this say in record and pass on to your friends and fans..
God bless all your work
.. your loving heart
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