you go girl
you speak those
words that are
so cool im no fool
your lyrics are tight
as a star light shining
across the sky i admit
im a fan of your work
because your style is
nice. you can take a bite
out of the whole world
i hope you win the new
artist award because i
know you deserve it .
* this poem is all mine *
I like Avril too but more for her voice. There is a newer up and coming young lady that has an impressive sound. I can't remember her name just now but I can pass the name onto you when I do. I think you would like her music too. :-) Anyway, I really liked this. It is nice for an artist to get credit from a fan like this for their hard work.
interestingly enough i also have great respect for this young girl. again very nice piece.
peace
~jaded
my only comment is that i'm big on spelling, and i think You spelled her name wrong - good poem
one love Corey & co
um first up its avRil. you forgot the 'R'.
and second. dont take this personally, because, well, its her i hate, your poems are good...
BUT
jesus the girl doesnt even write her own songs, just because she wears a tie and black eyeliner doesnt make her any less manufactured than britney or christina. shes simply a pawn for The Man, despite what she likes to think. shes no bad ass, shes just a little girl on puppet strings with her eyes closed.