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* Surfing Beauty*

                I saw you riding the waves

                the cool breeze running

                through your dark wavy

                hair. i couldn't help but

                to cheer you on .i just

                knew deep down inside

                my heart. i fell in love

                you forever on that day .



               * this poem is all mine  *

Author's Notes/Comments: 

*Surfing Beauty*is
a poem dedicated to a
sweetie you look good
in whatever you do in life im am so very proud
of you i will always support you 100% percent
i cant help i love you
so much i just want you
to be happy and enjoy
life to the fullest after all babe you have
earned it .a speacil place in my heart and
my life thats why i want
to get married to u and
live happily ever after
with you now and forever.

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©23 June 2002 - 11:38am — poetvg
14 April 2006 - 12:49pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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What a peom to give to a sweetheart. Very lovely Gail!

18 January 2004 - 2:33am — Zach Jacobsen (not verified)
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I skipped On Eagle's wings sence it's from something else...bible right? Anyway, Short but sweet ^^ On to #7

30 December 2003 - 11:08am — Sandie Angel (not verified)
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Lovely write indeed!

Sandie Angel :o)

20 March 2003 - 2:16am — Wei Yeo (not verified)
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THis poem is like Whoa! That you know that he is the ONE! Yeah the feeling of blessed love! Keep on writing!

9 July 2002 - 9:30pm — ugonna
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The imagery here
is capturing; as
well as, feels like:

"the cool
breeze running..."

Ugonna