Confused

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April 2004 Poetry

I’m confused,

should I run, should I hide?

Should I push you away?

Should I let you inside?

~

Do you still love me?

or love me not?

Should I be with you?

or stick with the loneliness I’ve got?

~

These things you say,

confuse my mind.

But no one like you,

will I ever find.

~

No one can make me feel,

the way that you do.

No one can ever amount,

or give me love like you.

~

But you went away,

and left me here broken.

Memories of long gone love,

my one and only token.

~

Once in a while you’ll call,

periodically, you’ll write.

You still make me smile,

and make things alright.

~

Maybe this confusion,

that I’m going through,

is just the consequence,

of me still loving you.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 4-26-04

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Megs's picture

Jill,
Yours was a featured poem, and actually good. I really like the flow of your wording. The last verse is my fav, "Maybe this confusion,
that I’m going through,
is just the consequence,
of me still loving you."

KUDOS TO YOU!