Circles

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June 2002 Poetry

My eyes are weak from crying,

leaving blackened circles,

of pain.

Circles that were traces of you,

and what you put me through.

Everyone sees the pain,

and the circles.

They worry,

but I’ll be ok,

It just takes time.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 6-5-02.

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Samantha Flynn's picture

I like this poem :-) I like how you wrote it

Sandra Davis's picture

I didn't really like this poem, but I liked the way it was writen.