You Let Go

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May 2002 Poetry

You let go,

of everything you had,

all the people who loved you,

all who cared.

You let go,

of all the happiness,

that filled your soul.

I wish you would have held on,

just a little tighter.

And if I could have,

I would have held on for you.

But I couldn’t.

And you let go.

I’m not mad,

just a little sad,

that you,

let go of life.



~*~ Jill ~*~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this on 5-14-02.

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hey.. i really njoyed reading this poem.. i understand it.. i cant relate as if dis poem were based on me.. good job.. you inspire me !!