Crisp, cool clean water runs over tropical green land, quenching her thirst.
this haiku is the best that i have ever read .
Your second line is off one syllable. Make "runs" running. Other than that, I loved this piece. There's nothing like quite nature to being out beauty surrounding us.
very good, and You kept it 5,7,5 - one love Corey & co
this haiku
is the best
that i have
ever read .
Your second line is off one syllable. Make "runs" running. Other than that, I loved this piece. There's nothing like quite nature to being out beauty surrounding us.
very good, and You kept it 5,7,5 - one love Corey & co