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I Couldn't Love You More

I could live underneath the sea

And never return to the shore

And I could count everyone of the stars

But I couldn't love you more

I could ride on a planet in orbit

And survive in a bloody war

I could catch a fairy in my hand

But I couldn't love you more

I could fly with a star a - shooting

For miles and miles I'd soar

I could rid the world of crime

But I couldn't love you more

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:27am
©5 March 2004 - 9:28pm — poeterri
27 March 2006 - 2:31pm — Laura Minns (not verified)
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tres bien :) c'est vrai? i love it :) very romantic, and it actually gave a goosebumps :) u r soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo talented :) i am very lucky to have u as a friend :)

29 January 2006 - 11:22pm — fighter4life
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Beautiful poem.

18 June 2005 - 8:05am — Angela Davis (not verified)
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I loved this piece. It's beautiful.

6 March 2004 - 5:30am — Karyn Indursky (not verified)
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Wow. I love this poem. It's sweet, romantic, compelling, fantastical, emotional, and well deserving of being published. You should try entering this piece in a contest.

26 June 2010 - 8:57pm — Danniel Lennax (not verified)
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Terri, this is one of the sweetest poems I have read recently. It is warm, sincere, and full of love. I hope that whoever you wrote it for appreciates it...and you.

Danniel J.