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Neptunal
If all the world did just let us be,
Creation would return to learn,
A new love in our hearts to earn,
The rising seas, be my girl and me.
A new light that tells the pearl to see,
A dance of dervish’ frenzied turn,
And water’s deep could not stop the burn,
Of our heart’s embraced in our intimacy.
For lo’ our love would be pelagic,
Our consuming passion would create the magic,
To turn the depths of ocean’s wide,
Into astral streams of steaming tides,
It could not ever be reminisced,
So I’ll be content when we have kissed.
©R.H.Elliott 2002
The title of this is what initally drew me to this piece, i was curious to know what it meant/was referring to.
Personally i am not much of a sap (i'm sure you've noticed, reading my work) ;) but there was simply something much deeper laying beneath your words that truly fascinated me. "It could not ever be reminisced, So I’ll be content when we have kissed." This ending, is the most beautiful thing i have ever read!
Beautifully romantic!!!
You do have the heart of a true poet.
Lord Byron would be proud.
Amy
Gentle is the night♥