My tears fall dark
like the red that burns
in my heart
this burden condemns me
Eternal sufferage
my body is cold
my mind...empty
my heart...dead
Warmth again
through my soul
uprising feeling
happiness, peace
fades
falling
loneliness
trapped
Tears fall once again
dark...and heavy
forever
Really, really good. I can almost feel the pain in this poem. It feels almost as if this poem totally fits into my life. Great job.