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Monologues for the soul.
I am the thoughts that you want, I am the vibes that you crave
I am the truth that you flaunt, I am the lies that you make
I am the death that you fear, I am life with it's fakes
I am the breath that you breathe, I am the visions you need.
She steeps deep in my eyes, my soul is lost in her
She tells me that's okay, baby just do what you can
You are the drive in my dreams, you are the wetness it brings
You are the pleasure I want, you are the life that I seek.
I am not your love, I am the darkness inside
I am the fight for your life, I am the truth you despise
I am the crackle that breaks, I am the scars on your face
I am the anger that seethes, I am the secrets you keep.
She shuts my eyes, her soul is lost in me
She tells me thats okay, baby do as you please
You are the love that I need, You are the weakness in me
You are the past without pain, You are the curse in my veins.
I really like your writing!
I really like your writing!
Great Job!!
this is my fav. I must say.. you are a wonderful writer I <3 all your work :D
Monologues for the Soul
Love certainly is give and take. What wonderfulll expression. And so two are one.
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Deep
On many levels I can interpret it in many ways. It appears like it's about a girl, but to me it could be about the earth too. maybe even our souls. Awesome. Truely awesome.
“What the mind doesn't understand, it worships or fears.”
~ Alice Walker
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost.
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by frost."
What I see
Well my friend, I like this one... it has a certain way of making one look within and see what may be hidden.
I like how it flows and of course... it rhymes! I look forward to reading your other writings, and I am sure they will move me as this one did.
As the eyes are the windows of our soul,
My poetry is the windows of my heart!!!
i love this one! good job
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B~Ur~Self!
Very Lyrical. I really
Very Lyrical. I really enjoyed that one, that may be my favorite one of yours. You by any chance a musician too? I couldnt help but feel a certain flow too it as though it was meant to be paired to music. Thats how I write often.
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