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Erotic Poetry

I want to fall asleep 

with the spunk of your words 
glazing my brain
With the tentacles of your affliction 
probing every fold
And the promise of your perversion 
oozing into the darkest crevices
 
I want to fall asleep 
swaddled like a newborn 
In the cradle
of your sickness
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S74RW4RD's picture

The last two lines strike me

The last two lines strike me as rather eerie.  Is that a correct reading?


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Eerie, ominous...

... these lines were meant to drive home how easily we can become comfortable and even feel safe (eg, cradled) in the twisted, boundary-pushing actions, thoughts, and words of someone with whom we have become enthralled. 


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Thank you for explicating

Thank you for explicating that.


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