Owning

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2010 Poetry

Trees
growing,
winds blowing,
clouds floating by.
Only nature knowing,
as I let out a great big sigh.
Every morning I awake asking why,
as I feel my aging skin cool with the breeze.
What is it all about that life implies,
should I go out and help supply.
Keeping it all flowing
as an ally
unknowing,
owing
these.

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Diatelle

The Diatelle is a fun, syllable counting form like the etheree with a twist. The syllable structure of the diatelle is as follows: 1/2/3/4/6/8/10/12/10/8/6/4/3/2/1, but unlike an ethere, has a set rhyme pattern of abbcbccaccbcbba. This poetry form may be written on any subject matter and looks best center aligned in a diamond shape.

The Diatelle form was created by Bradley Vrooman.

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Powerful poem

Powerful poem

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Thanks for coming by for the

Thanks for coming by for the read.