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Precious Gift

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2008 Poetry

Smile

through eyes

deep within

your soul to me.

Precious gift of warmth only I can see.

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Tetractys


Tetractys should express a complete thought, profound or comic,
witty or wise, using 20 syllables. 5 lines with a syllable count of...


1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 10


The "1 syllable" line must be a proper, interesting word
nothing like "a" or "the" etc...

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©23 July 2008 - 2:39pm — phil_carcione
25 July 2009 - 1:13am — heatherburns35
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beautiful owrk. Enjoyed:

23 July 2008 - 3:22pm — Bryan Adam Tomimbang (not verified)
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A smile more than a precious gift, it's a treasure! Beautiful.