We walk along hand in hand
Cool water splashing on our toes
Dragging our feet in surf and sand
Oh, how sweet our true love grows
Warmth of love ignites our souls
Intensely sharing our karma's flow
Knowing we have the same life goals
Losing all track of time as we go
Deeper and deeper as we walk
Looking into each others eyes
Feeling both our hearts unlock
Seeing the sparkle of fireflies
Sensing our hearts going up a degree
As we watch the moonlight on the sea
Beautiful and sweet. Sometimes when you read poems that rhyme on the end line you can feel it's forced, like they're tring to find a word to rhyme with another one just for the sake of it, but I haven't found that with this poem, it's like the words have always been there. Well done.