Sea Mist

Folder: 
2009 Poetry



Sea

spraying

salty mist

on the rocks of

old.






Author's Notes/Comments: 


Lanturne


The Lanturne is a five-line verse shaped like a Japanese lantern with a syllabic pattern of one,
two, three, four, one.

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heatherburns35's picture

Very nice. I like few words. Not so much
a lot of words, that go on and on. Like
forever, and really don't say that much.

Heather

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

like this because you can envision it