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I’m slipping into an ocean of pain
I’m super saturated
With the salt you keep throwing on my wounds
And the weight of your words
Are pulling me down,
Down,
Under,
The water
I keep swallowing so much baggage
And you keep dumping garbage
Into my soul
I come to you for love
And you burn me
With your acid tongue
Until I’m scalded alive
In your tender care
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