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Your Broken Friend Forever;

Tori D. Raup



Dedicated to: Erin

10-25-03



I'm so fallen, so broken

And no one seems to love me

Yet you keep picking me back up,

And I keep falling, you have struggles

Of your own

So much greater, I'm so sorry

I wasn't made to handle ANYTHING

Much more than the day-to-day life

I can't even handle that

I'm so full of weary, just at the thought of me

But you never give up on me

I promise someday soon that

I'll stop falling

So hard

Author's Notes/Comments: 

When I was at a Christian Writers conferance I had to write a poem on praise. and I was so terribley wallowing in my deppression the only thing I had to be thankful for was that she was there for me at this time.

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:12am
©21 February 2004 - 12:24am — perception
4 August 2005 - 9:29pm — salphire5
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Hi Tori,
This is lovely with very well expressed emotions. I am at this very moment terribly depressed about a failing longterm and very close friendship and your poem hits the spot. I think I'll go read it a few more times. Well done.