BY: Tori
8-25-01
I've lost the sight in my mind
Of your smiling face
I?ve suddenly gone blank
Lost without your grace
I never knew just what I had
'Till then I was without
Just couldn't understand
What it was all about
Everything you were, my something to adore
Everything you are, my something to live for
And then without a second thought
You're gone without a trace
I'm lost without my something
With nothing to replace
Your lovely smiling face
And only empty space
And I can feel
Were you touched me last
There's nothing left
For me
But the past
Sometimes
You'll see
You're on my mind
And I ask you not remind
Me constantly it's over
'Cause every time
You break my heart
A piece has gone with you
So please go away
I'm here alone to cry
I'd really like it if you left
Me here alone
To die
Please be CoNsIdErAtE
Remember
You
Are
All
I
Have
i so WISH i had written this. this poem describes one of my past relationships perfectly-to a "T"-and the word choice, rythm, and radiance of feeling in it are all just increadible! LOVE IT! keep it up - please! so if for no other reason, i have something to do :) your style is great.