CoNsIdErAtE

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Love

BY: Tori

8-25-01



I've lost the sight in my mind

Of your smiling face

I?ve suddenly gone blank

Lost without your grace

I never knew just what I had

'Till then I was without

Just couldn't understand

What it was all about

Everything you were, my something to adore

Everything you are, my something to live for

And then without a second thought

You're gone without a trace

I'm lost without my something

With nothing to replace

Your lovely smiling face

And only empty space



And I can feel

Were you touched me last

There's nothing left

For me

But the past

Sometimes

You'll see

You're on my mind

And I ask you not remind

Me constantly it's over

'Cause every time

You break my heart

A piece has gone with you

So please go away

I'm here alone to cry

I'd really like it if you left

Me here alone

To die

Please be CoNsIdErAtE

Remember

You

Are

All

I

Have

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I bvelieve this was written for: Christopher.
Although he never knew, I loved him for 6 years. You'll find many poems about him.

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Maryssa Bischof's picture

i so WISH i had written this. this poem describes one of my past relationships perfectly-to a "T"-and the word choice, rythm, and radiance of feeling in it are all just increadible! LOVE IT! keep it up - please! so if for no other reason, i have something to do :) your style is great.