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Ana- Ed
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Self harm/Suicide 11/12/01
I'm loving this can't you see
The hunger shooting throughout me
I feel so great I'm in control
A few more pounds I'll reach my goal
I watch the weight just melt away
I'm thinner now, than yesterday
You say you're worried I don't eat
I feel so light, I'm getting weak
You see my ribs; you'll see my bones
As I'm exploring thee unknown
I've been fasting for a week
And yet I'm feeling at my peak
You say I look already dead
Like I've not woken from my bed
And that you're worried,
I may die
Ana told me you would lie
I read a few of your poems, and this one stood out as one with some real talent. I like poems that rhyme, because I can't write ones that dont (I'm unsure if thats a blessing or a curse...) anyway, the feelings expressed in all of them are great, keep up the good work and comment on some of mine if you aren't busy.
Ste
Hey, thanks for posting comments to my poems, I appreciate the support.
I was looking at some of yours, and this one stood out in my mind, even after I looked at others. I really like this one. You capture the insicurity and despare of wanting to be thin. This used to be me too, thank God I'm not like that anymore. Keep writing, I can see this was written a while ago (from the date) and taht you've written more. Never stop writing when you enjoy something.
~Sarah