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Crying on the Inside
9/21/01
I'm crying on the inside
I'm purple black and blue
Yeah I'm crying on the inside
And all because of you
Can't you see that my heart is
Shattered
Broken, Beaten, Battered
Cause I'm crying on the inside
And all because of you
Can’t you tell my pride is wounded?
Broken down
It's lieing, dying on the ground
Don't you know my faith is slipping?
Dripping all away
Don't you see I'm different now?
Than I was yesterday?
Cause now...I'm crying on the inside
I'm purple, black, and blue
Yeah I'm crying on the inside
And all because of you
oh...this was beautifully sad...i can totally relate to this poem and it made my heart so sad, but that is a good thing...i loved the way you broke up the words, giving them power..
excellent poem!
kay :)
Hey there,
this is a really good poem. I could relate to it. What I noticed though, is that the repetion makes it seem alot like a song...have you thought of entering it into a song competion?
just a thought
-mary
hey! this relates well to me. i write alot of stuff like this. its great keep up the wonderful work!!!! -jesse
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i love this poem because in every way i have been though the same thing because of one poerson i am no longer happy. Your poem is really great.