This morning is drenched in
something new,
the first light floats
to the surface like
a new idea,
a little closer to Truth
and the all-seeing
ceiling of our
world.
I don't wish to write about it
just be in it,
live its easy life
where beauty is in being
and you are granted
splendor just for
being present.
No mad quest for wings
when the earth flies
beneath you,
and when love runs off
with all your best thoughts,
there is always something
better.
There's a special cloud
in the corner,
something like a volatile lily
that detonates softly,
shatters slowly.
Soon the tangled net of
branches cage a bluescape;
there's a pool of ink where
the lily once bloomed.
It's all an eternal changing,
a slow-moving still-frame.
And just what if the afterlife
has come to me,
not packaged in death's
spikes and chains,
but glowing like a
sea creature we discover
with eyes wide and
souls awakened?
How beautiful is Time,
kidnapped, distilled and
encased in a tiny glass
Now.
There is no end to the
well-trained Now.
Weightless with joy,
the meringue soul of morning
won't let me leave
my understanding;
I am nothing and I am the center.
Leaves, the color of June, blink
in and out of shadows,
in and out of gold-plated reveries:
their own fickle afterlife.
Like living prayers, they heal me
and perhaps I heal them
because, like Time,
we are endless and
everywhere and All
That Is.
Patricia Joan Jones
a new dawn of infinite
a new dawn of infinite oppurtunites ,bask in the twilight of dawn
ron parrish
Thank you for your beautiful
Thank you for your beautiful reflections.
my pleasure pat
my pleasure pat
ron parrish
Revisit still love this poem.
No mad quest for wings
when the earth flies
beneath you,
and when love runs off
with all your best thoughts,
one of many lines i love.
djtjohnson
Thrilled to see you! Thank
Thrilled to see you! Thank you for stopping by and leaving such supportive feedback. I value your opinion.
"Endless Dawn" is Hopeful Dawn
Vital piece for humankind, Patricia. Because "Endless Dawn" is hopeful dawn of Divine mercy,
"There is no end to the
well-trained Now."
Heavenly favor and glory to you, always, dear Patricia. We are grateful. Blessings. Ugonna
Such beautiful words of
Such beautiful words of wisdom and encouragement that brightened my day. Thank you so much!
You have taken the abstract
You have taken the abstract concept of morning serenity and given it metaphorical detail to male it distinctly more than a concept or thought-construct. And the great arc between this planet and the Cosmos, which your poems are so deft at tracing and explicationg, is perfectly functional in this fine poem. You have a style like Mozart---many themes, many variations, but always the same foundational style, the stamp or watermark, so to speak, that makes each of your works distinctly, and distinguishedly, your own.
J-Called
Thank you many times over for
Thank you many times over for your brilliant perspective and understanding of my message. Always honored when you stop by.
Thank you for saying that. I
Thank you for saying that. I think I may have said this before, but the style in your poems reminds me of lines from Shakespeare's play, Antony And Cleopatra: "Age wither, nor custom stale, her infinite variety."
J-Called
That's so encouraging and
That's so encouraging and beautifully said. And again, thank you.
Sorry for that STUPIDLY
Sorry for that STUPIDLY CARELESS TYPO: "Age cannot wither, nor custom stale, her infinite variety," is the more proper form. I am such a BAD proofreader, and just clumsily careless tonight. Again, I am very sorry.
J-Called
I'm the queen of typos when
I'm the queen of typos when I'm tired. Your comment was beautiful and much appreciated.
So many
So many lines pop out dont know where to start. such a smooth ride through beautiful words. Did you leave any for us to use? Leaves the color of June volitile lily. Nicely done.
debbie
Thank you for that amazing
Thank you for that amazing feedback, fine poet. It means so much.