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2002 Poetry

i am weedy, foolish and pathetic

a walking humungous fleck

confined unwillingly in this

vast laborious orbiting cubicle

out of a man’s rib i was

daintily molded but where

was my spirit made?

i am what they say the most

significant product of a

majestically perfected craft

by the ingress of enmity i stand to know

do you think my good judgment

would understand my predicament?

or will i ever come to understand

that underneath all the hardships

are His intangible promise of

infinite bliss



















wtritten 10/23/2002


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Patricia Jones's picture

Deep and thought-provoking. I like this: "confined unwillingly in this vast laborious orbiting cubicle" Great work. Pat