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in your eyes

i can see my

reflection--jittery









written 1/28/2003

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 12:03am
©1 February 2003 - 8:10am — pangan_l_l
1 February 2003 - 6:13pm — serene
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Good concrete imagery. Maybe you would consider deleting the "is" on the third line.