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A.K.A. My Name is Pam
My name is Pam
I'm a backwards map
I have no sense of direction
I am also an amp to make that loud and clear
Do you hear?
My name is Pam
I am a backwards map
I have no sense of direction
Can you guide me please?
I need guidance
Must I use my amp again to make that loud and clear
Do you hear?
Guide me
Confide in me
Are you listening to me?
Can you help me?
I am Pam
the backwards map
I use my amp
to make that loud and clear
Do you hear?
Do you care?
What was that about?
Must I scream and shout?
Must I use my amp
to cross over the ramp
of the mixed up and misguided and lost
and at what cost?
Poetry is free
free to be me
free to use words
but are they heard?
Who knows? Who cares?
Who lives? Who dares?
oh well
time will tell....
Entertaining write. I like to play around with words myself.
Mon, 5 Sep 2005 19:05:19 EDT
Subject: visited Post poems
To: pamschwetz@yahoo.com
and read my name is Pam, Clever and quite amusing, Couldn't critique there, as I said, I am forbidden. So I will stick to reading your poems on Starlite. Hope you get a chance to visit my site.. George
the backwords map is cute! i like that a lot! it's descriptive of many people who don't know what they're doing...so still relatable
~Danielle~
Backwards map...eh? I like it nice way of describing yourself. I'd say this would be a self portrait for you, and a very well done one perhaps. I like how you formed the stanzas at the end...they really enfasize what's important to you. And as I tell everyone...KEEP WRITING :
I hear
I care
This isn't
A dare
I'm here
For you
Always
I'll help you through
Lean on me
We'll make it through
Through thin
And through glue
Don't worry
It's okay
The light will come
The next day
We'll make it through
The dark and gloom
Stay by my side
And we'll throw away doom
Just remember
I'm here for you
So think of me
When you are blue
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~Destiny
the backwards map describes us all till we know what path we will individually choose. Great metaphor for self description. You have great talent keep writing!