SERIOUS MOONLIGHT

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JOURNAL # 41

the spell of attraction

has been cast

bearing such distinct markings

of some 'Serious Moonlight'

involved

plush petals softly fall away

revealing layers of newly

uncovered alike

volumes of interest develop

to gradually build up

clever reparte' coagulates

and slows the swift fluid flow

of these interactive moments

creating some lovelier snags

than previously could have been

imagined

a harmlessly playful exchange

slip switches

into a sweet syrupy glow

two emotionally charged spiritual magnets

find themselves helplessly pulled

and what was thought 

before to be a game

is oh so gently and carefully set aside

as the stars align to allow one particular

sort of universe to form and prosper

unvarnished admiration

privately formulating

planets and moons

revolving around a sun

so shamelessly golden............

(June 17, 2014 914am)

 

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Was feeling a bit lonely so I did what I do when I feel this way. I imagined some pretend man I'm in love with and who is in love with me and I write him a poem.  Pathetic though prolific I am lol. Anyway, Enjoy................

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Beatnik1979's picture

Excellent

Amazed with the picture show imagery..the assonance and consonance of the flow lend itself remarkably well to the piece. In trying to pick my favorite lines, I discoverd that they all were. Well done!

palewingedpoetess's picture

Thank you so much,

was tired and feeling a tad out of sorts so I wrote this poem to some pretend lover to cheer my heart up a bit. Your unexpected compliments added further to the cheering. So again thanks so much............ M.