the spell of attraction
has been cast
bearing such distinct markings
of some 'Serious Moonlight'
involved
plush petals softly fall away
revealing layers of newly
uncovered alike
volumes of interest develop
to gradually build up
clever reparte' coagulates
and slows the swift fluid flow
of these interactive moments
creating some lovelier snags
than previously could have been
imagined
a harmlessly playful exchange
slip switches
into a sweet syrupy glow
two emotionally charged spiritual magnets
find themselves helplessly pulled
and what was thought
before to be a game
is oh so gently and carefully set aside
as the stars align to allow one particular
sort of universe to form and prosper
unvarnished admiration
privately formulating
planets and moons
revolving around a sun
so shamelessly golden............
(June 17, 2014 914am)
Excellent
Amazed with the picture show imagery..the assonance and consonance of the flow lend itself remarkably well to the piece. In trying to pick my favorite lines, I discoverd that they all were. Well done!
Thank you so much,
was tired and feeling a tad out of sorts so I wrote this poem to some pretend lover to cheer my heart up a bit. Your unexpected compliments added further to the cheering. So again thanks so much............ M.