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JOURNAL # 41

discarded
haphazardly shed
a slick rubbery locust shell
formerly assigned
protective outer layer
to small fragile skin
abandoned in haste
for the giggling embrace
of a warm fall afternoon
of frolicking on a sunny day
at the local playground
that tiny 'Blue Raincoat'
looking back at me so crumpled
and forlorn
tangible proof
that its owner is
a blessing surrounded by love.............
(Oct. 4, 2012 938am)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

something I saw not long ago while strolling by a playground. That tiny blue raincoat and what love filled,bubbling little tyke it must belong to and in that moment as I gazed out at all those ecstatically happy preschoolers playing, I wondered which one of them must he or she be who discarded that adorable little raincoat to dart off to play on the swings, the teeter totters or the jungle gyms. What amazing energy that tiny rain coat hugs itself to when that is it is not being shed for warmer day pursuits. It was these thoughts that tumbled around in my head and transfixed the poet in me.

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©4 October 2012 - 1:49pm — palewingedpoetess
4 October 2012 - 4:54pm — Jesster
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I have always loved the way

I have always loved the way you write!

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4 October 2012 - 2:56pm — Cruelty
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I LOVE IT I LOVE I, the

I LOVE IT I LOVE I, the imagery is something amazing, i wish i could describe something like that one day. Keep em co

4 October 2012 - 3:14pm — palewingedpoetess
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Thanks C..............

though you seem to have lost your sentence's final ending........... cute type o I suppose.............. Sincerely, M
P.S. If you like this one then look up in my site Eying The Hills Of Heaven. I believe that one to be far superior to this one...............Just type it in this poetry page's search box and it will pop up.

4 October 2012 - 11:11pm — allets
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3000 Pluss Poems

I will be reading for a while - you are simply very good at what you excel at...Lady A

 

 

6 October 2012 - 1:12pm — palewingedpoetess
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Ah thank you so much lady A............

have an at em............ if you want to have some laughs start at journal # 1. I put em all on this page to show new poets we all have to start somewhere. Now that I have you in my list I'll cruise your site as well. Thanks for the encouragement........... sincerely, Melissa