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VEILLESS AND UNCOMMON

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JOURNAL # 41

my heart means nothing
to me
if I can't give it to you
miracles
to me
are each additional breath
you take
my personal evolution
is stunted
without the additive of
your spirit's contribution
clearer and clearer
it becomes
that our love for each other
removes all common veils
together we are whole
'Veilless And Uncommon'.................
(June 7, 2012 1022pm)

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written for nobody in particular, other than a certain irascible rascal who likes to call and talk to me. laughs..........

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©8 June 2012 - 4:39am — palewingedpoetess
15 October 2012 - 4:47pm — allets
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Uncommon Writing

...removes all common veils...a summation of the title...irracibility is wondrous. Only a truly whole person could give so much and remain whole . . . Lady A

 

 

4 July 2014 - 1:27pm — palewingedpoetess
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smiles..........

I admire your style of writing so much, so this is lavish kudos from you. Thank you so much Lady A. Am glad you enjoy my poetry. That means a lot to me. So many times I'll read your critiques of others's poems after I've read the poem itself and I'll be blown over by your critique too. You are like to dog in the critique writing sometimes I think. Anyway, once again better late than never respoinding to your kind words. My best wishes to you, M.......