believing what you say
and saying what you believe
I strongly insist are not the same things
I admire your talent at many levels
but question your sincerity and
judgment of what is right and good in this world
you paint for me Monet out of paint by
number box kits
and try to convince me novices flock to your
book steps
clamoring to behold the master poet
in his element of earned creativity
when in reality the poet over flatters
and needles his chatteress masses
for love poems writ about himself
an on line Lothario I labeled thee
shameless in his tireless sweeping up
of scraps of compliments
whether they be false or genuine
and this is where our divisions start
I sir, do not sugar coat anything
I shoot from the hip
and call a shovel a shovel
I could never be a fan of
eternally blowing smoke up a
fellow poet's ass
I should not be upset
for today through your own
universal words for the first time
I really read you clearly
and realized I finally saw you
as you really are
'A Collector Of Butterflies'
you value your collection
as a whole
though you praise each new
acquirement
it means no more to you than
the previous nor the next
you will accumulate
only the collective as a whole
retains for you some intrinsic value
and there dear sir
you and I must agree to differ
I do not hold you up so I can show
you off to others and be proud of myself
for having collected you
you mean something to me individually
and the others I do not name, brag about
you to nor compare
each relationship is separate and of similar value
one has little to do with the next
for I sir am no butterfly collector of souls
I am a sincere woman who reaches out to
individually bond with friends
you won't catch me adding you to my
vast impersonal over praised lists
of fellow poets I claim love me so much
that is not my narcicisstic style
I seek friends not people to prop me up
and make me look better than I likely
ever could be
you revealed something far
more revealing to me today
and you did so without even knowing you had
in one word
it all came down to
INSECURITY
and frankly sir, I was flabberghasted
'twas like driving really fast on
some really nice road
and you suddenly hit a really bad pot hole
the jolt you left me with was highly sincere.........
(Feb. 23, 2009 502am)
The brilliance of this poetic analysis cannot be over-estimated. This is the finest summary and truest view (of its subject) that I have come across on postpoems. I realize, now, that my own fictive character, Azazel Shucks, is a *fellow* collector of butterflies (I say *fellow* in order to keep proprieties). I noticed that the subject of your poem has not, and most likely will have not, replied. Words like yours disrupt the festal atmosphere of the mutual admiration society that has been created on postpoems. I thank you for your comment on my poem and your link back to this one.
Starward
Frank and thoughtful,but let the heart of a poet flow with freedom, go through your lines again, for one or two edits.
Hi Melissa,
I Read your poem, really enjoyed it.
I agree with you,
Collector of Butterflies
I get your drift.
I'm no butterfly
and will not be
collected by anyone.
Bull can only be spread
so many times. It gets annoying
after awhile
but they better think again.
Not to be self-serving, or self-advertising (like some we have seen), I have posted some epigrams on peace-wishing tonight and I invite you to take a look at them. Obviously, they proceed from my personal theological beliefs, but I think they raise legitimate questions. I promise, however, that I will not ask anyone to translate them into any other language.
Starward