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you are a sweet tempest to my flesh



a golden lure



your glow bespeaks all of my gentle wishes for you



happy man is all I seek



achieving his dreams



all he lacks is a mate to tenderly take him away every so often



from the harsh realities of life



and love him soundly to his full and beautiful self



life that is what love has in it to give



remember this my darling



my love equals your life



your love equals then too my life.....



I think it always has.....



(Aug 28,2000 7am)

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©13 July 2003 - 8:24am — palewingedpoetess
3 December 2003 - 1:48am — Corey Fox (not verified)
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beautiful piece of art - thank You! please check out my stuff, also i have 3 books available through bn.com/amazon.com under the name Corey Evan Fox

one love Corey & co

1 December 2003 - 7:39pm — gentle
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Swet, tender, passionate, well deserves to be called a poem dedicated to the emotion of love.

Amy Riberdy

Gentle is the night♥

1 December 2003 - 7:24pm — kiwi
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Beautifully spoken, Melissa.Your poem well describes the unity of true love.

Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.

1 December 2003 - 1:34pm — James Booker (not verified)
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Very romantic...I like the way this poem is structured.

26 October 2003 - 3:21am — poetvg
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i like this poem .