A critique on my poem drugs ll
Don’t get me
Wrong the
Program DARE
Is good
And it’s very
Educational
To the young
Generation in
A lot of ways.
But a lot kids
Who graduated
From DARE
Program these
Days end up
Trying drugs
And more then
Likely getting
Addicted
Anyway no
Matter what
The people in
The program
Said about
Staying away
From drugs.
My point I’ve
Been around all kinds
Of drugs in grammer
And high school
And I know what
kinds of
effects
they
Can have on
You.
If you like my poem
It’s fine but I write
What I feel inside
And some things
I write I do have
Strong feelings
Behind.
Feb 21st 2006,